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Mount Olympus Prom

Even gods have problems with everyday stuff, in this case it's high school; Prom. In this story there is a school called Olympus High, it was almost the end of the year and Prom was coming. People were busy asking other people,the only people that don't have dates are Aphrodite and Hephaestus. Hephaestus, is a good, smart man but no one has asked him to prom. Aphrodite, a beautiful girl lots of guys asked her, but all the guys that asked her were cool people, she said no to them because her dad is the principal, Zeus. Zeus wants Aphrodite to go with a good student. One day he heard that an "A" student doesn't have a date to the prom, he asked who he was then it was Hephaestus. Later, Zeus went up to Hephaestus and asked him, "Hephaestus, would you like to go with my daughter Aphrodite to prom ?"

Hephaestus answered, " Sure !" " Yes I finally have a date for Prom ."

Later that day, Hephaestus went up to Aphrodite and said, " Looks like we're going to be each others dates." Aphrodite replied " Ummmm, no! Get out of here Dork !!"

Hephaestus said "But your dad told me . . . . . " Aphrodite answered "ohh, my dad. . . . dont worry about him he's old, I dont know what he's thinking." Then, Hephaestus just walked away as soon as he heard that. Zeus saw Hephaestus down, so he went up to him and said " what's wrong son" Hephaestus answered " why did you lie to me? I was hoping to have a date to the prom, sir." Zeus replied " Oh I see, Aphrodite said that she's not your date. Well, don't worry I'll talk to her when we get home.

That night, Zeus got home at dinner and Aphrodite was already on the table. Zeus sat down and said, "So Aphrodite, why did you turn down Hephaestus." Aphrodite replied, " because I don't want to go out with that dork." " You go with whoever I tell you to go," Zeus nswered. Aphrodite replied, "Yes Father." The next day when Aphrodite went to school, she went up to Hephaestus," So, it does looks like were going to be dates for Prom." Hephaestus replied, "really, we're going to be dates, Yes !" A couple days after they were preparing for prom, Hephaestus has a nice suit ready and Aphrodite had a beautiful dress. When it was time for Prom they actually had fun. Some careless mistakes but a decent story. Proofread and revise next time! 20 out of 25!