Carlos+G

The Great War
 * Hermes** **Hades**

This is a story about a Greek god named Hermes who had an evil friend and Hermes could not stand evil and without knowing…. a war started. It was a sunny day at Greek Gods Junior High, when Hermes saw a new god. He quickly introduced himself and became friends. Hermes did not know that the guy who he just introduced himself to was The God of the Underworld named Hades who was evil and liked to bully kids at his old school. Hades said, “Hermes would you like to go take some kids lunch money?” Hermes refused the offer and said “You like to cause misery to little kids?” Hades said “Why of course. I am the ruler of the underworld. Do you have a problem?” Hermes replied, “Yes I do, and I am afraid we can no longer be friends”. Hades was shocked and asked “Why? I thought we were going to be great friends!” Hermes replied, “Because you are… EVIL!” The feelings Hades had for Hermes was no longer friendship it was hatred. Hades was filled with anger and without knowing he said “ THIS MEANS WAR!” Hermes gathered up all of the gods and Hades gathered up all of his evil friends and headed up to Mount Olympus. Zeus sent all of the guards he could, but Hades wiped out all of them then they all agreed that they should send Hermes because he started all of it. Halfway there he was attacked by one of the evil minions of Hades. Hermes forgot to bring his armor but thankfully his father Zeus was watching over him at all times and he hit the horrifying demon with a thunderbolt and then came flying the armor and weapon of Hermes. Hermes defeated all of the evil demons of Hades until at last they met. Hades “Are you enjoying yourself?” Hermes “Why Hades?” Hades replied, “Because you were my only friend… and you betrayed me. So now I am filled with rage just looking at you. Hermes replied, “If that’s how you see it.” Then they both charged at each other and when their skins touched a huge explosion emerged and both of them crashed into the wall behind them. Hermes and Hades had not known that the explosion they had made would make them mortals forever. They lost all of their memory. They were sent to Earth and went to Carnegie Middle School. Hermes and Hades became best friends when they both got the same teachers Mrs.Nogowa and Mrs.Isakson.They never became bullies and they both got straight A’s. They went on living for the rest of their lives as best friends until they died. Interesting twist at the end. few errors but overall very good 24 out of 25